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An excellent article found on io9.com is a great way to get the blog up and running again, don’t you think?   This article is written under the premise that it is the opening which carries the short story; it grabs the readers attention and compels them to read the rest.  As I read the article I found myself thinking back to my most recent fiction attempt, which never got past 20k words for NaNoWriMo, and wondering which opening mine was, or even if it was applicable in what was/is ultimately a novel.

The 7 types of openings are:

1.  scene-setting

2.  conflict establisher

3. the mystifier

4.  third person narrator speaks to you

5.  first person narrator speaks

6.  the quotation

7. the puzzler

What’s great about this article is not only does it go into great detail about what each type is, it gives examples from great stories AND discusses when you should and shouldn’t use the opening in your story.  This is a great read and very helpful for writers, check it out!

 

 

I’m not too sure where this story came from. It just popped into my head, I swear I’m not an environmentalist…

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Moving Day

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The portals opened about a week before Moving Day. They were small at first, strange glowing circles of light that just hung in the air. Most were outside the cities and some, like the one near my home, showed up right in the middle of downtown between the skyscrapers throwing off that strange light day and night. They made the electronics around them wonky, and they buzzed something awful.

The police came first and cordoned off the area, pushing people back and displacing us from our homes and offices. The containment zones grew and grew as the portals got bigger; the whole of downtown was evacuated a couple days before they came. The army moved in and scientists came to try and figure out what they were. The portals were as tall as buildings and as wide as a city block by then. Massive blocks of light that lit up the sky for miles around. They were all over the world the reports said, on every continent.

They came on Moving Day, without ceremony they began pouring out of the portals. Short fleshy round things tottering on skinny legs, strange bags of meat that looked more alien then I ever imagined anything could look. Big bulbous heads that swiveled impossibly to push their two little eyes this way and that, slack too-wet mouth holes gaping open in their faces filled with a multitude of awful looking teeth. From this nauseous hole poured screeching, chattering sounds that they used to communicate with each other.

Some were clothed in rags, others in finery that I could call opulent if it weren’t so alien. Everyone carried something, strange boxes that seemed to hold their possessions, all they had in the world. They poured from the openings into our world. They came on foot, if you could call what was on the ends of their legs feet; they came in machines the likes of which we’d never even dreamed of. Strange craft that flew by unknown means drifted out and hovered over the crowds entering our world.

They seemed as surprised to see us as we were to see them but that didn’t stop them from coming. They poured in day and night for three days, first hundreds, then thousands, then millions they came and trudged away from the portals into our world. We told them to stop, they didn’t understand us any better than we understood them, we shot at them but the flying machines they brought with them rained a cold white fire down upon our armies that obliterated everything it touched. Our finest weapons of war were swatted from the sky like flies at a picnic. Even many of the ones on the ground carried weapons, strange handheld guns that spit flame at us and tore our bodies to ribbons.

Finally, the fleshy beasts stopped coming though the portals but before they evaporated into nothingness vast machines rolled out on treads to follow the groups moving away. I saw one with my own eyes, it was a thousand feet long and two hundred high, nothing could stand in its way. It ploughed though buildings as if they weren’t there and left a path of destruction in its wake as it moved away with the aliens. I watched on the news as the aliens made their way to secluded areas of our world, the deserts, the arctic, the forests, it didn’t matter they moved away from us and their massive machines finally came to a stop. When they did something amazing happened. The big machine seemed to fall apart into thousands of smaller machines. All moving like a hive they swarmed the ground and started building. Skyscrapers rose, roads rolled out and whole cities were built almost overnight. Industry sprung up and started belching black smoke into the sky as more and more machines were built. They spread like a plague over the land harvesting everything they could find to build their city. Massive open pit mines pried minerals from our soil, huge derricks pumped the oil from deep underground at a furious rate. When it was done massive gleaming landscapes of sky scrapers dotted our world, filled to the brim with the round discolored beasts that had invaded us.

They go about their lives, ignoring us. Taking what they want from our land. Their industry is constantly spewing incalculable toxins into our air; our scientists say it’s the greatest global environmental catastrophe since the industrial revolution. We’ve tried diplomacy, but they ignore us. We’ve tried war but they destroy us without even noticing. They go about their strange lives, ever consuming.

Some have ventured out of their cities in recent years. They haven’t learned our languages but we’ve learned some of theirs. We’ve talked to some of them, they say they came from their world, five hundred million of them but just a small fraction of the billions they had, when they have finally exhausted all their own resources. Their world is dead now and all they left behind is gone, they say they’re not leaving here that we have to just put up with them. They are unapologetic. We asked them where their world was, they point at the night sky, at the edge of the bright galactic span and say:

“There, it was called Earth but its dead now.”

I’m not normally a reader of short stories.   There have been three specific exceptions to this: a zombie anthology, an apocalypse anthology and Stephen King’s Hearts in Atlantis. So, when Jeremy C. Shipp put out on Twitter that he was looking for reviewers for something “dark with heart” and I immediately jumped up and down like the kid at the front of the class with their hand up in the air, pleading “Oh! Me! memememe!!”  I didn’t know that I was offering to read short stories.

Being extremely unobservant and completely missing the intro pages on my first walk through,  I had no idea what to expect beyond “dark with heart”.   I sat down for a quick preview read, cuz I was still reading ‘The Year of the Flood’, and was instantly swept away into a marvelous dream landscape.  It sucked me in so deep that I couldn’t stop reading; I forgot about dinner cooking, about my kids screaming at each other, and even that I was reading anything else.   Then I got to the end of a page and turned it, expecting a new chapter, and it was over!  “No!” I actually cried out, causing my kid to yell from the other room, “what, mom?!”

The stories in Fungus of the Heart illustrate exactly why I don’t like to read short stories.   They’re just too good to be confined to a handful of pages.   There was so much more that could have been expanded and expounded on, that many of the the individual stories it would have made excellent novels.  ‘The Sun Never Rises in the Big City’ had a film noir kinda feel to it,  almost a combination between Dark City and Sin City.   There’s so many possibilities around this story that I could even see it as a screen play.    I really would have loved to read more about the universe, have the characters and backgrounds explained, and really would have enjoyed seeing Frank as the anti-hero, shaking up the pyramid.

The talent doesn’t stop there, either.  Each story in this collection has that dark, film noir, dreamscape/nightmare feel to it, but they also have their own voice. ‘ Fungus of the Heart’ almost feels part fantasy, built around Protectors and Sentinals, magic and fortresses, while ‘The Boy in the Cabinet’ turns your perceptions upside down while building a truly unique universe, creating images in the mind reminiscent of Pan’s Labyrinth.  ‘Just Another Vampire Story’ is a short glimpse of love lost nightmare creating images of black and white, with splashes of red.

The collection is unlike anything I’ve read before and thats where its appeal was, for me.  Each story was unique and the prose is so well done, the words perfectly manipulated to flow almost like poetry.   I was incredibly impressed that such disjointed images could be captured and relayed so well, through the written word.

I am glad that I went into this collection with my mind open and willing.  Despite my disappointment in short bursts of pleasure, instead of the drawn out luxury of a good novel, I am happy to say that this is a collection that is worth reading.  This would be the perfect book for the casual reader and fan of dark and weird, who only has time for a quick story.  I would definitely recommend it.   My thanks and appreciation go out to the author for allowing me to read it, before it’s release.

You can pre-order this collection here:  Fungus of the Heart

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